i tried to make it sort of a blueprint of the building. when i finished, it
looked too plain and empty. so i texturized it. but it still looked empty. at
first, i didnt have the white writting because it looked too busy. then when i
have it, i think it might look too busy. i dont want the wall to have to much
action where it over shadows kilik [the character].
i really like the way this wall is looking. so any criticism is welcome.
first off, the water level (where the sky and water meet) is a straight line.
normally water isn't that straight. even if eve's in the pond. might i suggest some waves? it adds a little realistic effect.
the scan of eve is great. and using her position as if she's sitting in the pond
is a great idea. probably if you blend it differently. because the glow effect
is nice, but probably not the best.
the embosed tree on the right corner is a good idea. it gives more of a 3-d
effect. but the ripple looks a bit unatural. i suggest levling it out more to
make it a little more natural.
i hope this helps you. g'luck! i'll be looking forward to your submission in the Black Cat category!
1.) he's has be sweet in his own way.
meaning: nothing reptitive. if he's always going to give flowers and candy say
he cares 24/7, then what's point in being original? i personally don't mind but
doing things his own unique way makes me appreciate it more.
2.) i got to be in tune with him.
meaning: at least fun to be with. honestly, going out with nothing to talk
about can end up to be boring. there should something we could talk
about.
3.) he's got to be a good sport.
meaning: he can accept the way things are. if i'm not the best in video games
(which i am), he's has to be willing to deal with it. if i like this idol, he
has to deal. if my parents feel like interrigating him like he's a criminal,
he's gotta go with the flow. (yes, my parents are typical asians) he should not
care about anything tangible but care about who i am... not what he wants me to be. otherwise, where's the
natural attraction?
4.) personality.
meaning: well... that's explanitory.. at least a moral one.. you know, doesn't drink (on other occasions) or
smoke.. is not a hard-core perv..
and
5.) he has to care.
meaning: we at least to watch over each other's well being. if something bad
happens, i know that he'll be there for me. as i'll do the same for him. that
also means he won't do anything "fishy" by dating others.
so those are my 5 points.. naive, yes, but that's how i feel..
i have yet to find him, so if you're out there, find me!
cant say i have. >< but imagine if the ones that live in the same country
as you. you could pass by them on a daily basis. and not even know that it's the
same person you chat with.
well done, neechan! i couldn't have said it better myself
hopefully this will make people start having a clue on how to comment.
>.> the guide is here, people. USE IT! XP imbeciles...
have you ever got separated from someone in the mall, found the person, and then
find out you've followed the wrong person? O_o (i just realized that it sounds
like stupid question)
thanks for the suggestions, guys. they were quite helpful.
this is the wall
i tried to make it sort of a blueprint of the building. when i finished, it looked too plain and empty. so i texturized it. but it still looked empty. at first, i didnt have the white writting because it looked too busy. then when i have it, i think it might look too busy. i dont want the wall to have to much action where it over shadows kilik [the character].
i really like the way this wall is looking. so any criticism is welcome.
well i see what calisqo and fireflywishes meant.
first off, the water level (where the sky and water meet) is a straight line. normally water isn't that straight. even if eve's in the pond.
might i suggest some waves? it adds a little realistic effect.
the scan of eve is great. and using her position as if she's sitting in the pond is a great idea. probably if you blend it differently. because the glow effect is nice, but probably not the best.
the embosed tree on the right corner is a good idea. it gives more of a 3-d effect. but the ripple looks a bit unatural. i suggest levling it out more to make it a little more natural.
i hope this helps you.
g'luck! i'll be looking forward to your submission in the Black Cat category!
sparked
eh, i'll give it a shot.
1.) he's has be sweet in his own way.
meaning: nothing reptitive. if he's always going to give flowers and candy say
he cares 24/7, then what's point in being original? i personally don't mind but doing things his own unique way makes me appreciate it more.
2.) i got to be in tune with him.
meaning: at least fun to be with. honestly, going out with nothing to talk about can end up to be boring. there should something we could talk about.
3.) he's got to be a good sport.
meaning: he can accept the way things are. if i'm not the best in video games (which i am), he's has to be willing to deal with it. if i like this idol, he has to deal. if my parents feel like interrigating him like he's a criminal, he's gotta go with the flow. (yes, my parents are typical asians) he should not care about anything tangible but care about who i am... not what he wants me to be. otherwise, where's the natural attraction?
4.) personality.
at least a moral one.. you know, doesn't drink (on other occasions) or
smoke.. is not a hard-core perv..
meaning: well... that's explanitory..
and
5.) he has to care.
meaning: we at least to watch over each other's well being. if something bad happens, i know that he'll be there for me. as i'll do the same for him. that also means he won't do anything "fishy" by dating others.
so those are my 5 points.. naive, yes, but that's how i feel..
i have yet to find him, so if you're out there, find me!
^ you betcha.
< has no idea of what do for halloween yet.
V had a hard time once he/she first encountered MT3 like me?
^ probably so XP
< has an even older computer
v is an MT-er.
wow... left this thread for a while..
you have no idea..
have you ever gotten attacked by a pigeon?
i was exposed on the age of 8. never really used it until i was 13. =\
cant say i have. >< but imagine if the ones that live in the same country as you. you could pass by them on a daily basis. and not even know that it's the same person you chat with.
well done, neechan! i couldn't have said it better myself
imbeciles...
hopefully this will make people start having a clue on how to comment. >.>
the guide is here, people. USE IT! XP
nope, can't say i have.
have you ever got separated from someone in the mall, found the person, and then find out you've followed the wrong person? O_o (i just realized that it sounds like stupid question)
nope, but accidently poked someone else's.
have you ever laughed at something others found serious?
nope, stepped on a thumbtack. (ah, the pain)
have you ever stayed awake a full 48 hours?
never had. but i always wanted to!
have you ever wished on a shooting star?
yup, i accidently touched the metal sides of the socket while it was still partially plug. i know it's stupid... i was 7... >.>
have you ever....made a weird promising ritual when you a kid?
XD
i thought that was funny.
not in drinking age
have you ever walked barefoot on the street?
physically, yes
a
girl's gotta defend herself
have you ever...talked to yourself in the mirror?
accidently
have you ever.... broke a mirror?
nope. is there such a thing? i've heard of 1-800 or 1-888.
have you ever made a catchy catchphrase amoung your friend? (if so, what is it?)
yup! and my eyes did hurt after that
have you ever thought of making your own movie?
nope. still wear glasses to complete my dorkie-ness XP
have you ever hummed without even realizing you were? (i'm to the point where i can't think of any good questions)
tried, almost choked
no, but i slept during an exam
have you ever farted in public? XP